Mana ki sapney sunhaney hote hai
Par zindegi yeh mera koi sapna toh nahi
Chandni jo faillaye raat bhar dharti mein
Woh chand mera koi apna to nahi.
Rehne do us chand ko mere
Sitaron ke aangan mein
Main bhala kyun mangu use
Apne khali daman mein
Aachal hai choti meri
Samet naa usko payegi
Khwabo ke galion se guzarkar
Jaab hakikat se takrayegi
Hum to chandni raaton mein
Baas usko dekha karenge
Tanhayi mein kabhi baithe bhaithe
Sapney sajaya karenge
Sapney agar hai khoobsurat itni
Toh woh bhala ek jhoot hi sahi
Do pal ki agar yeh khusi de dil ko
Toh mujhe nindh se kabhi jagana nahi
Zindegi ka yeh silsila
Jab shaam ko dhal jayega
Laakh bulayo tum is dil ko
Yeh lout ke fir naa aayega
Yaad karoge ki kabhi ek
Shayera hua karti thi
Joh kamoshi mein kahi door se
Wafaa nibhaya karti thi
My first poetry book- Fragrant flute of fire
13 years ago
3 comments:
"Chandni jo faillaye raat bhar dharti mein
Woh chand mera koi apna to nahi"
Hi sas,
Sach kahu tu muje ye do lines kafi aache lage. Ye duniya ki sacchayi hai ki aaksar hum insanoko parakhneki(samjne ki koshish) koshish hi galat hoti hai. Aur har khusi aapnose mile ye sochna bhi galat hai.
Sas its a nice poem, i think i need to take your autograph now only.
But one suggestion try to write some romantic poems.
Regards,
Kumar
last stanza has no link with above matter...the theme suddenly changes there..Poem can be more meaningful if last stanza removed...
Amit Parkhe
last stanza has no link with above matter...the theme suddenly changes there..Poem can be more meaningful if last stanza removed...
Amit Parkhe
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